feedback from childrens film

this is our film feedback sheet, it shows the other groups comments on our film and said whats good/bad about it.

main feedback...

the good feedback:
- music
- camera work
- opening sequence
- concept
- comments on the good timing, for when he puts his ipod in and the music changes and also when the ipod crashes.
- and they liked our title with the spaghetti

the improvement feedback:
- background noise (even though we liked that)
- better fluidity between cuts
- they didn't see our title, could have been bigger.
- shoes where already on